Tuesday, July 11, 2006

What did Jon expect? the Anti Christ?


" Don't worry about it, everything will be just fine. Simon and Randy will again be your judges for this round. Just remember the two guidelines. One, they cannot get out. And two, you are not allowed to team up with your mirror counterpart to take over our universe. Got it? That's the challenge, what will you do when you engage your counterpart? Will you fight? Will you play chess? Will you thumbwrestle, watch TV, argue, or dance?" Jon stood smugly as he looked at us…


The cameras zoomed in as I went to Jon…

"Jon I hate to rain on your parade but I am a descendent of…" I began to say

"You are the Magdalena… yeah yeah I know…" Jon stated as if he knew what was coming

"Jon then you know, I can not be evil… " I tried to tell Jon


Somewhere in front of a TV Kodiak watches as he drinks a beer and replies, "I wouldn't be so sure darlin'"
In the background the TV still plays as the conversation continues….

Jon's voice is mixed with the snow and fuzz from the TV, "Maggie, that is the challenge. I don't know what you will find over there. There are several dimensions in the Mirror Universe, just like this universe, and anything that is possible is possible and can be found in each dimension."

Maggie continues to argue, "This is what I am saying Jon, it's not possible. What is my evil version going to do, lead an occult?"


Kodiak scratches, "or the Catholic Church…. Dump dump dump dump…"




Camera pans around … "Maggie that is the challenge…." Jon walks off…


I mumbled, "A boring Challenge, What am I going to find…. Nothing… that is what…. An Evil Magdalena? Never! An evil Church? Not likely!"

I grab the spear of destiny and a few other weapons….

I step into the portal…

As the image returns and my surroundings become clearer, I look around….

I began walking down the street; I wasn't on Hacknor but New York, my old stomping grounds. Everything looks just like the place I came from. Nothing out of the ordinary…

I decided just to relax and enjoy this challenge when I noticed the banners, "NO no no no…." I began to gasp…. "Not this nightmare, no…."



I wasn't sure what I would find but I had never thought I would find this…. I check the date…
July 11, 2006… I saw the TV in the stores….



No that is…. It can't be though he was born on… April 20, 1889… that would make him…


Klaus Hans Hitler…. A son?



Welt Kaiser…. Emperor of the World… THE WORLD!!!!
Another person appeared,


Johann Schmidt… He I remembered… Red Skull….



Then a familiar face…. No it couldn't be…. NO!!!



It was it was me….


"Don't panic!" I thought to myself… "Mirrorverse so maybe Hitler is a good guy, like Ghandi…. Yes the Swastika was originally not a symbol hatred…"


I had to investigate….. I looked up and realized an important symbol missing from New York…. The Statue of Liberty….. it wasn't there, instead was ….


A concentration camp….

I traveled to what should have been DC and to what should have been the White House…


It was weird not seeing the pentagon or some of the icons so associated with the United States…. In fact that part of North America wasn't called the United States….

I quickly discovered as I walked around the palace my worse nightmare…. World War 2 Hitler won, he didn’t commit suicide but conceived a son with his mistress and conquered the world. The other me, when not standing with the red skull was standing next to him, the son of Hitler….



Even worse this mirror image was Hitler's lover. I discovered the Church backed him and his policy….



I couldn't… wouldn't let this continue….

I tried to use my power to show some of the soldiers the errors of their ways, when I met up with another familiar face… SHI was also defending this evil….

I was force to fight and kill SHI…. She was as strong in this Mirrorverse as in my universe…

I followed my other self and I found another concentration camp… I followed her in…. It was children… I watched with horror and sorrow as my alter ego watched children being lined up in front of this brick building… Behind the building stood a brick wall several miles high….

It towered in gloom…… She walked looking over each child….

Evil Magdalena snarled as she passed the children, "Worthless, pathetic, nobodies….." She snatched each child by the hair on the heads and tossed them to the ground… I started to draw my sword….

Evil Magdalena waved a Nazi Officer, "All of them, send them all in… Do what you will… but in the end you will rid us of their imperfection!"

She marched off. I wanted to follow and kill her but those children….

I took on the guards with great force….. I walked through the building, rooms of labs for experimenting and went to the back into the yard, which the wall isolated….

Hanging from 2 poles was the remains of two children, half-decayed and being pecked at by crows…. I found bunkers like that found during WW2….

One room had claw marks on the walls, made from children's fingernails and stained with blood…. It was some sort of chamber…. I decided I had seen enough….

I would free these children… I used my Spear to blind the soldiers and began cutting through the bodies….

I noticed the so-called World Emperor and decided it was time for him to come to an end… I attacked …. His men came at me while others escorted the Kaiser away…

I heard an alarm and saw the portal… My time was up…. I went to run for the portal but heard a voice …. I recognized her voice…. It was me that was speaking…

My evil twin laughed as she came in to sight…. "So this portal explains a lot….."

I drew my weapon, "You won't be able to pass, even if you could I wouldn't let you!"

The Evil Magdalena matched my moves, "If I can not pass neither shall you…."


I began to fight but how does one fight one self…


We were equally matched, I realized though she didn’t have the spear…. I reached to use it….

Evil Magdalena landed a kick in my chest and leapt in the air grabbing the spear…. She could use it just as I could….

I saw it glow, I began to brace for a whole lot of hurt when suddenly it was pulled into the portal and disappeared…. The aura was that of a guardian angel…

"Looks like someone has fallen from graces…" I said as swing my sword catching her sword

Evil Magdalena twisted and kicked my other sword as she came at me with another kick, "Your opinion" She spat….

We twisted around more as we fought and counter moved…. I saw the portal a blast was coming from some armored tanks at the portal…. My evil other threw a halberd at a Sergeant, "Not at the Portal you Idiot!"


I tried to use her distraction to my advantage as I lunged for her but she grabbed me…. "Now my sister I break your neck and take your place…"

As she gloated I reached for my sword



I was able to thrust it into her and jump through the portal just as it closed ….

I sat still and drew my sword at the figure that walked up behind me. Jon gulped hard as the sword's tip touched his Adam's apple, "Easy Maggie, it's over."

I sighed as I stood, "No Jon, not as long as that kind of evil exists in tihs or any universe. It's not over, it can't be."

I sheathed my sword and walked away….
I sat mediating in my room when I felt Charles came in, "Maggie you okay?"

"No, that was me… Aiding in that … that …. " I couldn’t even speak of such horrid evil…
"It wasn't you Maggie." Charles began to say and I turned away not able to face him

"No Charles, It was me, something I thought I couldn't possibly be capable of…" I hung my head

"We all are capable of extreme good and extreme bad, but we can choose to be good…" He set his hand on my shoulder

"Well at least the other me is dead…" I said as I returned to my mediation


Meanwhile in the Mirror Universe…

9 Comments:

Blogger palefacemann said...

Brillance pure brillance. when do we get a story with super natzi man

Tuesday, July 11, 2006 7:06:00 PM  
Blogger Professor Xavier said...

Maggie the She Wolf?

I hope that wasn't the Last Son of Krypton carrying your evil twin away at the end.

Tuesday, July 11, 2006 8:28:00 PM  
Blogger Local Henchmen 432 said...

All I have to say is wow...

Tuesday, July 11, 2006 9:04:00 PM  
Blogger Private Hudson said...

Hot Nazi vixens! I don't know if I'm turned on or disgusted.

Tuesday, July 11, 2006 9:18:00 PM  
Blogger Vegeta said...

I'll crush Kal-el from any universe ! After I'm finished with Brolly

Wednesday, July 12, 2006 12:17:00 AM  
Blogger Magdalena said...

thanks pale face

it seems so Charles


wow is good Henchy


typical Hudson :P

and even more typical response from vegeta :)

Wednesday, July 12, 2006 12:23:00 AM  
Blogger Jon the Intergalactic Gladiator said...

Uh oh, Ubermann seems a little upset that you killed his hot girlfriend.

OK, so now that you killed your Evil Counterpart, what happens to you? Will your doppleganger from another universe swoop in a gut you? You better keep your eyes open!

Wednesday, July 12, 2006 10:34:00 AM  
Blogger A Army Of (Cl)One said...

HeY Jon, If teh moron scince communtiy of a braindead planet like Hacknor can come up with a mirror universe portal, who else is going to do this.

Sorry, just a random question.

Wednesday, July 12, 2006 11:50:00 AM  
Blogger Jean-Luc Picard said...

Great story, Maggie!

Wednesday, July 12, 2006 12:06:00 PM  

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